listen to my story!

[Mariobros16]

The Story of Pokepalace (I'm not done yet! I will work on different chapters)

Chapter 1

One day, a boy named Bob Spamer had some Ice-cream in his hand and he could not stop licking it. "Hmm..." he said. It was so hot out so kept on licking! But then, all of a sudden a it got knocked out of his hand by a stupid bird! "My ice-cream! Don't worry ice-cream, i'll get you back!" he said. He quickly went to his father's friend's house. The man who lived there was Prof. Oak. He hated his job. He would always say "uhh.... geography is soooo..... boring..". Bob came bashing through the door and said "Professor! Professor!"screamed Bob "What is it, Bob?" teh Professor said. "I dropped my ice cream down the drane on combo streat"! said Bob.
"Ewwwww... why do you still want it?" said Oak. "I just want it!" said Bob. "Okay, if you say so..." said Oak.
Oak and Bob went to combo street and Oak pulled off the lid and said "There!" "Huh"? You're not coming with me?" asked Bob. "No, no no! It's disgusting down there! and you're a kid, full of energy and sugar! You can do it Bob! I know it!" he said. "Okay.... yeah! I can do it!" said Bob. "Yeah! sure!" said Oak. Then he pushed him gently. Bob jumped down and started walking through the sickning water towards something so weird thst it would change the world forever....

Well, that's chapter one everybody! Like it? ;D

[Furret]

This has nothing to do with Pokemon. Although the name Prof. Oak is used, he is said to be a geographer in your story. Therefore, he is not the Pokemon Prof. we know of. Prof. Oak is not a geographer. This will be moved...well, there is no place for this, so I don't know what to do with it.

Anyways, this is too short for a first chapter.

[Mariobros16]

he is a geographer before they dicovered pokemon. Pokemon hasn't been discovered yet. they discover pk at the end. u need to chill out a little buddy.

[Umbreon]

They discovered Pokemon before he was old enough to get a job, if not before he was born. o.0

[Mariobros16]

it's just a stupid story, okay?

[Umbreon]

Alright.

[Mariobros16]

just go along with it.

[Mariobros16]

Chapter 2

As Bob walked through the water, he was looking at the wall. He saw mold and spiders and much more... "Yuck!" he said. then he found a ladder at the end of the sewer water. He climbed for what seemed hours through the blackness... Then when his head hit the manhole at the top, he said "Oww!" Then he fell off. "Awwwwwwwwwwww!" he screamed. The screaming got quieter and quieter.... until... boom! He hit the water! "Ohhh major belly smacker..." he said. Then he climbed up all the way again... When he removed the man-hole, the light from above hurt his eyes. Then, he saw a giant tower. He looked up and it said in letters he could hardly read 'Sky Pillar". "Wow....." said Bob. He went inside. In the pillar, there were knocked down pillars, logs and rats. But then, Bob heard a noice from the top of the sky pillar. A srcreaming.
It sounded like. Eouuuuuuuu! Then the pillar shook!
Bob got scared and ran for the exit. But then, right in front of the exit, some pillars fell in front of the ext. Bob was trapped! But then, the shacking stopped.... and then i piece of the ceiling fell down and had steps...
"What the.... uhh..... oh yeah! Kinda forgot what i was doin!" said Bob. He stepped up the stairs. By the time he reached the top of the stairs, Bob's feet hurt very bad. When he looked, he saw some more small stairs.
-_- Bob thought. He walked up them to find.... nothing... "WHAT!?!? Hey! My ice-cream!" yelled Bob. He went over to it and picked it up. Then he said "how did you get up here? Oh well. I guess this wasn't a complete waste of my time... but what was that sreaming?" he said. Then out of clouds came a huge green dragon..... Bob awed and dropped his ice-cream again... What was this creature?

[Skyquanza]

hahahaha funny.

[delboy]

mariobros16 said:

it's just a stupid story, okay?

Ah, I see

[Furret]

Well, it's not like other Pokemon stories I've read....

[delboy]

And how many Pokemon stories have you heard